高一英语作文：old saying_700字

释然

学生原文
       There is an old saying that no one is perfect, so everyone will make mistake sometimes, though we want to do best. When we make mistake, we must say sorry to others, for the purpose of showing our regret, so that they will forgive us and continue to keep in touch with us. Some people think apologize will lose their faces, so they choose not to say sorry. A wise person will make apologize in a natural way and let the past be past, the good way to apologize can help people feel easy. People can find the chance to apologize when they are having munication, they can make the topic about apologize and then saying that he is sorry about what he have done, so everything will seem easy. Apologizing will promote peoples munication and keep their friendship. So dont feel losing face, just admit what you have done wrong.

润色后的英文版本    There is an old saying that "no one is perfect," so everyone will make mistakes sometimes, even though we want to do our best. When we make a mistake, we must say sorry to others to show our regret, so that they will forgive us and continue to keep in touch with us. Some people think apologizing will make them lose face, so they choose not to say sorry. A wise person will apologize naturally and let the past be past; a good apology can help people feel at ease. People can find a chance to apologize when they are communicating—they can bring up the topic of apology and say they are sorry for what they have done, making everything seem easy. Apologizing promotes communication and preserves friendship. So don’t feel like you’re losing face—just admit what you’ve done wrong.



译文：
有句老话说 “人无完人”，所以即便我们想做到最好，每个人有时还是会犯错。当我们犯错时，必须向别人道歉，以表达自己的歉意，这样他们才会原谅我们，继续和我们保持联系。有些人认为道歉会让自己丢脸，于是选择不说对不起。明智的人会自然地道歉，让过去的事翻篇；恰当的道歉能让人感到安心。人们可以在交流时找到道歉的机会 —— 可以主动提起道歉的话题，然后说自己为所做的事感到抱歉，这样一切都会显得很轻松。道歉能促进沟通，维系友谊。所以不要觉得丢脸，只需承认自己做错了什么就好。
润色说明（主要调整点）

• 语法修正：如 “make mistake” 改为 “make mistakes”（复数形式）、“do best” 改为 “do our best”（补全物主代词）、“make apologize” 改为 “apologize”（动词形式正确）、“munication” 改为 “communication”（拼写修正）。
• 表达优化：如 “for the purpose of showing” 简化为 “to show”（更简洁）、“feel easy” 改为 “feel at ease”（更符合 “安心” 的语境）、“keep their friendship” 改为 “preserves friendship”（“preserve” 更强调 “维系” 的稳定性）。
• 逻辑衔接：用分号（;）和破折号（—）替代简单逗号，使句子间逻辑更清晰（如区分 “明智者的做法” 与 “道歉的作用”）。
• 指代一致：将 “he is sorry about what he have done” 改为 “they are sorry for what they have done”，避免单复数矛盾，保持指代统一。